Allan Brockwell
Tuesday, December 20, 2011
Good enough to get win the poetry contest for a 6th grader?
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It's good, the only thing I would try to maybe work on it the meter, it doesn't have a natural flow, try adding or subtracting syllables. But it still has wonderful content, keep writing
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